War in Iraq
On September 11 ,2001 many people lost their lives in New York. The terrorists blew up the World Trade Center and that’s when the Iraq war began. Now there are a lot of American soldiers in iraq looking for the people that did the damage. It was so sad to see famillies crying 
and everyday people die in iraq about a bomb trap. This is going on almost 6 years. Our president is trying to work things out, so the soldiers can come back home.
I think war over land is not justified; they shouldn’t be fighting cause many innocent are dying. We need to compromise ……….
..EnD
and everyday people die in iraq about a bomb trap. This is going on almost 6 years. Our president is trying to work things out, so the soldiers can come back home.I think war over land is not justified; they shouldn’t be fighting cause many innocent are dying. We need to compromise ……….
..EnD
Posted by
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17:57:26
You have a special writing style that is really fabulous. It is interesting! But Monseigneur, you didn’t really talk about the main idea/ the assignment. Do you think fighting for land is justified??? In any situation? Do you think people can SHARE land? Is it possible.
Mon, this is a big run-on sentence. Please go back and fix it for more points: The tourist blew the World Trade Center and thats when the iraq war begin now there is a lot of American soldiers in iraq looking for the people that did the damage.I